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Snuffling
warmth, in a pile of furry paws and tails the others shift hoping for a bit of
mom’s affection. Stretching and yawning, falling out of the pile and into the
sunlight something new, foreign snakes across my path. Curious, my teeth worry the
intruder until it’s pulled sharply from my mouth causing pain and a yip as I
scurry back to my worried mother.
Only the
opening to the box has been closed. My nose bumps into a solid wall. Scared, I
whine as my bladder lets go, it’s instinct to show I’m not top dog. There are
loud noises above me – thunderous. My body shakes harder. My tail tucks hard
against my belly, I’m all wet and scared.
Hands reach
down and pick me up, dragging me up towards those loud frightening noises.
Please, just let me go back to my mother. Just let me go back to where it’s
safe and warm, my heart cries. Lifted up, the world sways, sickeningly so, but
I can see for a heart-stopping moment the nest I knew, the warmth, the love all
the licks of her tongue, the nips of her teeth, the liquid love of her eyes. Then
came the slam of the door and the cold bite of air as the swaying noisome things
clutching me made for a foul smelling box that hurt my eyes. But it was strange
this air, it burned my nose, made it sneeze and itch. I wanted to cry but the
creature holding me made growling sounds that scared me. Sounds that made my
heart tremble and beat crazy fast.
Clambering
into the shining box, I couldn’t hold in my cries, the creature holding me
wrapped something around me, they closed us in and my howls echoed back making
me even more afraid. I felt like the only dog in the world. Light glinted, reflected
and exploded, heat built up, and I bark and cried, but it only made me
exhausted. The creature held me tight, the shining box swayed and bucked and
lurched. Pant…pant…pant…
Awake!
What is this thing around my neck and
why is it so heavy?! The creature put me down – outside! In the grass and dirt –
yes! But I have this heavy thing
around my neck. I try to step and for every third step I fall on my face.
Looking down I can see I’m dragging something. What…? The creature picks me up
and puts me in this huge cold box with a roof. It smells of another dog. Slowly
I investigate. The creature keeps chanting some noise.
“Hope,
Hope, c’mere here, girl. Hope, come on,” the rattle of something gets my
attention and I look up. It smells like food, I try to bite but the pieces are
too big and too hard. Loud noises sound over my head as I worry at the pieces
of food, treating them as toys. Feeling thirsty, I look for another bowl, but
don’t see any water.
Thirsty, I
lift my head and sniff the air. So many scents! Grass, wood, rot, the
creatures, and more, but my belly rumbled and my mouth was dry so I sniffed and
scented again and again looking for the tang of water, whimpering when I couldn’t
find what I wanted. Hopping down, I walked out until I couldn’t go anymore then
dragged myself one way then the other looking for water. In the end there was
something that slaked my thirst, but it wasn’t very good and it made my belly
hurt.
The light
was getting low. I was all alone. It was cold. The food was no good. I wanted
to go home. Turning I saw the covered box I had left. Tail low, I drag/tripped
back inside and cried my sadness to the heavens. Still not a dog replied. Was I
the only dog left?
“Hope, c’mon,
wake up Hope…” the noise started again today. So tired. So hungry. So cold. Shivering
and stumbling, I made my way over to the two-legged one crouched by the food
pan. Maybe today it put something there I could eat? Hope bloomed in my heart
only long enough to see that nothing new was there. Just the same too hard to
eat pieces. Not even water. Crying, I went and stood over the pan, but the
creature didn’t seem to understand. It touched my head and walked away.
Three
days later…
Rain pattered
on the top of the box. The smell of water surrounded was everywhere, wriggling forward;
she licked the food pan and whined at the salty flavor. Her stomach ached from
too many days of drinking out of the polluted puddles in the yard. No food to
balance out the toxic mix hadn’t helped. Now the rain water softened up the old
hard dry so her milk teeth could tear it to bits.
Bright
lights flashed in her eyes and she growled at the sharp invasion, barking madly
defending her only meal in so long. A two-legged creature stood in the rain
leaning over, peering into her box. It spoke low, calmly. Still she barked,
this was her meal!
* * *
A week on
the road and he had to come home to this, no doubt his wife was having
hysterics already. Knocking on the neighbor’s door, he plastered a fake smile
on his face. “Heya, Earl. Didn’t know ya got a new dog.”
“Yeah,
got me a beagle pup, named her, Hope ‘cause I hope she’s a good one.”
“Well,
don’t forget you got to train her up properly, and they need a special diet.
You can’t just take them out in the woods and instantly get rabbits and birds,
you know.” Jim smiled affably wanting nothing more than to punch this moron
right square in the face.
“Nah, it
ain’t all that, Jimbo,” he brayed like a jackass swatting his knee. “You just
take ‘em out into the woods, let ‘em do their thing. It’s second nature.”
James
sighed. He hated the “Jimbo” thing. “And what if it isn’t ‘second nature’ Earl,
what then?”
“Why then
it’s even easier,” his neighbor smiled in that loose way that signaled no one
was home at all, “you just come home empty handed.” With that he shut the door
in his face.
James was
almost home before he realized that was what happened with the last hound,
Pete. The hunting trip where Earl had gone out with a dog and come home with ‘empty
hands.’
1 comment:
OMG! What do I do!? How we turn the story around!? Such a good angle to write from!
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